So after Hegai asks for Esther’s name, and Esther replies, “Esther”, the scene will blackout, audience will applause, and there will be music that will transition to Mordecai’s first moment on stage when he will sing these words (still a draft):
Day after day
Turn after turn
Oh my darling Esther
when will you return?
Night after night
Week after week
Will it soon be bright
or will it be bleak
[instrumental]
Day after day
What shall I do
Hope she didn’t tell them
that she is a Jew
Night after night
I lay in bed
Where are all the good times
They seem to have fled
And that was the result from today’s live songwriting session! Looking forward to what we’ll write next!
