Was working on “Day After Day” in today’s live songwriting session. Elizabeth gave a priceless contribution: “set-apart” to rhyme with “heart”. Here’s the result below:
So after the king sings the line, the repeat is going to be a round (also suggested by Elizabeth) wherein all 3 sing: Esther, the king, and Mordecai! So right now working on the logistics and the arrangement of the round. Might use the option #2 “day after day” melody to harmonize the round. This and also the melody for the harem is what I’m currently working on.
